Sunday, November 29, 2009

Happy Monday!!!!

Hope everyone had a Great Thanksgiving and Black Friday :)

I wrote a little bit of the introduction because i would like to incorporate something I like, nothing more. but it is justified!!

Still reading up for some more information in my Literary review.(he citations may be a little off )

Please enjoy!!

TRADITION! Tradition! We, the audience, are bombarded with opening musical number of Fiddler on the Roof . the plot is narrated by Tevya as he tries to marry off his daughters.

Dai dai dai dai the song continues to list the variety of rules to promote good living with in their community,

As early as 1904, Writing Centers have traditionally (Carnio,1995)aided student to improve their writing skills. Like our traditional sessions with in a writing center, in a traditional Writing center the tutoring style is prearranged like the marriages of Tevya’s daughters. Only when Tevya is willing to break with his ‘tradition’ does he ensure the happiness of his daughters, we as tutors should do the same by trying new venues of tutoring.

In Stephen M. North passionately gives his definition of a writing center as “simply one manifestation-polished and highly visible-of a dialogue about writing that is central to higher education…..we are here to talk to writers.”(North 71-72). Within a writing center the student’s paper is the focus were the improvement can take place. From brainstorming an idea to helping with grammatical errors, it is the duty of a tutor to aid a student writer in composition. A writing center can “be a site where experts and novices meet often to externalize tacit information-those values, assumptions, and options that inform all texts within a discipline”(Shamoon and Burns,239). Here, in a writing center ”what counts as knowledge ”( Freebody,Luke and Gilbert,1991,pg454).

We can take the definition of a writing center a step further; in Collaboration, Control and the Idea of a Writing Center. Andrea Lunsford breaks-up writing techniques into three categories (similar to the three daughters of Tevya.) “storehouse”, a more traditional venue, requires the writer to a absorb information like a sponge. “garrets” minimal tutor involvement being key, it is completely dependant on the writer, or Burkean parlor, where tutors are to give up their role as the leader and critical thinking/ collaboration reins supreme. But“ we must also recognize that collaboration is hardly a monolith. Instead, it comes in dizzying variety of modes”. We are going to explore one of these genres of collaboration in the writing center coined the writing studio or as Rhonda Grego and Nancy Thompson coined studio in thridspaces.

According to Grego and Thompson in Writing/Teaching in Studio Thirdspaces a writing studio or studios thirdspaces works by encouraging students writers “to “teach” other group members the terms and concepts taught by their teacher, to discuss issues of writing, brain storm in front of the group with the group about their topics, read their drafts and revise parts of their drafts. (99)This process allows the student writer to increase their self esteem through group presentations it also allows them to actively express themselves, think critically and convince others in the group of their conceptions. By sitting in close proximity of each other (Grego, Thompson pg200) student begin to built a relationship that, over the course of time, creates a bond among the participates. Not only is this bond between the students and tutor, but also with each other. This bond allows a more relaxed state of mind that eventually leads to “ teacher and student let[ing] go. Slightly of their defensive hold on their exclusive cultures, and the interaction between their scripts creates a thridspace for unscripted improvisation(452-53)

Methods

Case studies, Observations and Literature were primarily used for collecting data for group one over a period of one month. Researching by case study, I was allowed to analyze what techniques are used by an initiator in a writing studio session. By Observation, I could witness first hand the process of writing in a Writing studio setting. Also, by participation I cold compare and contrast my own experiences as a rookie tutor.

All those who participated in group one were Undergraduate and Graduate humanities majors at a fairly new writing center at an east-coast University. All participating students were readily engaged. The first set of students were all involved in the same course and were familiar with each other before the tutoring sessions began. engaged in their work/same genre of work.Each session was were an hour in length, now my categories to date are:

· Initiators questions

· Participates body language

· Shifts in attention.

Most participates had some form of tutor training previous to joining the group ranging from novice to expert (initiator); two participates where tutors within the university’s writing Center.

As an observer I chose to focus on these points as well as:

© shifts in attention,

© which students chose to participate in the conversation,

© what verbal/nonverbal feedback was given to those who participated.

© Points of interruptions

© When the conversation went off/back on topic

During each observed session I kept a list of questions present as well as a diagram noting: seating arrangements, the number of interruptions, number of positive feedback given by the initiator/participates. and a count of when the group “got off topic” and returned to the topic.

In these sessions the tutor takes on the role of an initiator In this position, s/he does not readily offer an opinion, but through particular questions, gets the participates to answer critical questions. For example, the student writers take on a Burkean parlor position as the tutor takes on garret or a minimalist approach.

Sunday, November 22, 2009

Blog 18 RP-Day......

In what way does active participating in a Writing Studio benefit a student writer in a higher learning academic setting in comparison to the tradition of peer-tutoring?

In my limited case studies and research, i believe(as of today) that Writing Studios are excellent option to help student writers develop a research topic, give perspective for an essay, and verbally express themselves while conversing with a group of active peers. It is believed that student writers in a group are encouraged to "teach" other group members the terms/concepts taught by their teacher , discuss issues of writing, brainstorm in front of the group and with the group about their topics, read their drafts, write their drafts and revise parts of the draft.

I hope to convince the reader that a writing studio is paramount to a writing center to help a student broaden their horizons of writing as well as try to have students push themselves to the next level and have multiple perspectives.

As Nancy S. Thompson and Rhonda C. Grego note in there collaborative work Teaching/ Writing in Thirdspaces, a writing studio helps (us) to be more aware of those external pentatonic factors and their influence on our work as teachers with the internal pentatonic scenes of course readings and writing assignments(159)

Information for this research paper was accumulated in 2 basic forms. the first being that of observing group session with the Kean writing center. and drawing on my own past experiences in a Writing studio and one experience an a casual setting.

During the session I have observed I wanted to focus mainly on:

  1. How does the initiator get students involved in the group's discussion.
  2. How are writers greeted by each other.
  3. What questions are asked by the Initiator to get writers to respond.
  4. How does he initiator give praise compared to Peer Tutoring.
  5. How do writers respond to each other?The initiator?
  6. When/How does the student show interest.
  7. When/How the writer/initiator interrupt each other.
  8. When are their non-verbal and verbal cues.
  9. How often does the discussion go off topic/ WAY off topic.


References

Grago, Rhonda, and Nancy Thompson. Teaching/ Writing in Thirdspaces. Carbondale,IL: Southern Illinois University Press , 2008. Print.

Macauley, William. Marginal Words, Marginal Works?: Tutoring the Academy in the Work of Writing Center (Research in the Teaching of Rhetoric and Composition). Indiana University of Penn.: Hampton Pr, 1999. Print.

Guyierrez, Kris, Besty Rymes, and Joanna Larson. Script, Counterscriptand Underlife in the ClassroomJames Brown veruse Brown v. The Board of Education. Boston: Harvard Educational Review 65 452-53, 1995. Print.

Freebody, Professor Peter R.Qualitative Research in Education: Interaction and Practice (Introducing Qualitative Methods series). Thousand Oaks, CA: Sage Publications Ltd, 2003. Print.

Lunsford, A. (1991). Collaboration, control, and the idea of a writing center. , 12, 3–10.


To repeat, my session, i have:

Kept records of verbal interruptions

a verbal/ physical record.

Each time the group gets off/ back on topic.
How everyone is arranged in the room by letter./seating placement


When and how people
interrupt each other and who makes eye contact(for example when asking a question the writer usually slouches and looks down, but when agreeing/ giving their opinion s/he moves their hand with their expressions).

I have noted what questions are asked by the initiator and how they are worded to get everyone in the group to respond.



Sunday, November 15, 2009

This shall be long! the 17th of November, a day I'll, always remember

Let's start with a joke....
Why don't oysters give to charity?
Because they're shellfish.
ha Ha HAAAAAAAA! now to business :)
Statement of purpose: Through research and observation, i hope to encourage writing centers to incorporate a Writing Studio to their agenda. And that a Writing Studio is a better option for a student who needs help developing a research topic, opinion for an essay, and verbally express their ideas to an active audience.

Detailed statement of your research question:
What are the benefits of adding a Writing studio to a Writing Center?
  1. What can a student Encounter in a WS that they may not have in a peer tutoring session?
  2. What can students accomplish with a WS that they can not in a WC?
  3. How does expressing ideas to an active audience encourage the speaker?
List of the information you need to gather

  1. How does the initiator get students involved in the group's discussion.
  2. How are writers greeted by each other.
  3. What questions are asked by the Initiator to get writers to respond.
  4. How does he initiator give praise compared to Peer Tutoring.
  5. How do writers respond to each other?The initiator.
  6. When/How does the student show interest.
  7. When/How the writer/initiator interrupt each other.
  8. When are their non-verbal and verbal cues.
  9. How often does the discussion go off topic/ WAY off topic.

A preliminary list of sources
An idea of a writing Center by Stephan North: I want to quote his statement about" people want to attend a WC" only :)
Andrea Lunsford for CC and the Idea of a WC: Quote her definition of Collaboration and a few of the benefits:)
Shamoon/ Burns A critique of pure tutoring: just to quote again the definition of a Master class and group work
Harris Collaboration Is Not Collaboration Is Not Collaboration: give a definition of peer groups and has a list of the benefits of group work
Grego/ Thompson Teaching/ Writing in Thirdspaces: The studio approach: (Just finished the prologue and 1st chapterish): quote their definition of what happens in a WC and the benefits in a university setting
And i think i want to quote Aristotle's poetics or Shakespeare too.

Plan for gathering your information

For a pass few sessions i mostly have been keeping a verbal/ physical record.
i note each time the group gets off/ back on topic.
how everyone is arranged in the room by letter.
when and how people interrupt each other and who makes eye contact(for example when asking a question the writer usually slouches and looks down, but when agreeing/ giving their opinion s/he moves their hand with their expressions).
i have noted what questions are asked by the initiator and how they are worded to get everyone in the group to respond.

Also, i will quote as much as possible to prove my finding. i know i have plenty of reading to do, an i really REALLY would like my purpose to be correct.



quick outline ish.....
Summey of project
introduction: quote someone/define a WS and Collaboration
How was data collected including participates and what method were used (taking note)
Give examples from group sessions
what where the benefits and drawbacks of a WS in this case
Conclusion/ was i right?

list of resources too

Friday, November 6, 2009

In this the Year of our Class the 15th of the Blogs

Can i just say. Wednesdays class was Awesome!!! I wanted to say Thank Dr. Chandler for letting me pick the Writing Studio as my assignment:)and thank you guys so much for really getting into the discussion.

I think i am beginning to narrow down my focus on something more exact.

What are the benefits and drawbacks of a Writing Studio? Or what is the most sufficient way to run a Writing Center in a University setting. I will have the opportunity to look at a minimum f Two groups(plus research) to carry out this project(ureshii)

Unfortunately, i hadn't the chance to have another writing session until Wed.(hurray). I thought the session went well, Dr. Chandler acted as the initiator.

In this session I looked mosty for:

Eye contact of the Speaker(who is it given to): I discovered a pattern: when the Speaker asked the Main writer(s) questions, they would look at the writer. But when stating their opinion the Speaker would look between the initiator and Main writer. AND when critiquing each other s/he would look directly at the initiator.

When mostly everyone participated (you could see the passion!)the eye contact was like watching a tennis match!(also, so far )

How the writers addressed each other:Everyone was polite to each other. the session(when i started taking notes) began with very polite language and over the course of a few jokes and AHH/Uh huh. the language began to slip into something a little more casual.

Interruptions: There were several interruptions, the main phrases used to interrupt were:
1."Yeah"....
2. "I understand what you are saying but"....
3. "Well".....

Silences:
Any time where more that 3 seconds passed. there where 2ish. One was when Danny arrived, and the other when she left.so i don"t think they count....... there was a half silence when i explained the situation of the misunderstanding.

Side tracking: For the most part. the session conversation never reverted from the subject of the writing center. each Writer had a chance to talk about their subject and how it pertained to other

What i have observed so far:
- knowing the tutor does cause ease within a session....or cause tension.
-the Body language expressed in a session can give the tutor/write little cues on how to continue a session.Especially Facial expressions
-I learned at my old job,when it comes to ESL students, native English speakers need to pay attention to their rate of speech. Just slowing down really helps the writer.


Onwards and Upwards!Blog the 14th

Question for the blog:) :Post your purpose + your research question. Do some brainstormy writing about what you will observe at sessions to gather data for your project.

Hmm. that is a tuffy.... I know i want to prove that group sessions are also a vital way of exploring different perspectives; group conversations help narrow down a focus and i some cases even aids in organization!

My question though.........Hmmmm lets see......... What are the Benefits and or drawbacks of a Writing Studio? Juxtapose one on one collaboration with that of a group session.
How does a WC aid the writer in the writing process. What are the key components to having a great initiator :).
i think i will observe what phrases are used b the initiator during the beginning middle and end of the session. Also i will note the pauses. what happens, does the initiator hope right in or wait for one of the other writers??
I want to see how the writers react to the initiator as well as each other. what is said. what was don"t and key movements.like eye contact/ slouching are the top picks.

To help i have in listed the help of Google Books and plan on hitting up the Kean library site.
Now that i got the hang of what i want. not i must go out and look up extra info AGAIN.But now, i feel good and a little excited :)

Monday, November 2, 2009

Greetings. this is Lucky 13!But it's not Friday......

This really took a while, but i think i got it down.

i think my paper will be
How an idea is formulated in a session at a WC. What are the main steps that the tutor/writer do?
By observing a session i will focus on :
What writing techniques were used during the session.
What was done first(greeting, check the assignment sheet, check definitions)
What techniques work best in the first stages of the Writing process
Who does the writing when(in the begining which person is the best choice for writing down the information )

I was able to find some great references in the back of the Tutoring Writing book for example:
Wasik B.A.aned R.E. Stalvine's Preventing Early reading Failure With One-to-one tutoring(it lists some key components in the writing process)
Bishop "Writing from the tips of our tongues:writers tutors and talk(Gives some examples of observations of Collaborative tutoring and is on Google books :))
Of Course Lunsford is on the list as well as Carter.

I was not able to find any good references on the Kean website YET:). i will continue to look, but these writings i have completed and home to read again for more notes.
I would love to write a paper on Collaboration in OOO and Group sessions (benefits and drawbacks of each in the first stages of the writing process). but the only way i can get observation is 2 sessions from Teresa and maybe a mock session with fellow classmates.